She spins like a tossed
coin wavering,
toppling. Heads this time.
Caught on the other side,
sifting light
resolves and shuts.
Clanging door stirs dust.
He draws down shadows,
firm, solid shade.
A favorite chair,
a lamp just so.
Choices slip, resettle.
A creed carried over
crevasses. Hope or habit
reaches for heels, clawing.
The fickle heart knows
no schism, it falls or soars
and grapples with change
and sighs for novelty.
I haven’t seen this sun
Before. I like it.
Buy it for me, baby.
I wasn’t going to work on anything for this week’s prompt at the changed Poetry Thursday, but bless Dana and Liz’s hearts, the song in the prompt’s title never got out of my head. I hoped this exercise would excise it.
I started thinking about humans and change. How many people hate it (I am usually in that camp, at least about certain things), and yet, the drive for novelty has tickled many a social theorist’s fancy—and advertising campaigner's heart—because that drive is such an interesting concept with broad consequences. I believe Habermas talked about it, as did my own personal favorite theorist, Georg Simmel.
Mixed into these musings—about the love-hate relationship I think most folks have with change—is something I read while researching my senior project on birds (well, it’s actually about providing bird habitats in our urban world). The idea was that some research points to crows' ability to thrive in our human-enclaves as being due to their love of novelty. Makes them more curious and open to learning and adapting. Novelty = evolution? (Maybe if I ever get back to last week’s prompt I can exploit that idea.)
The poem above doesn’t get to the heart of crows, but it does attempt to paint a picture of the duality of human nature: hating change but embracing novelty. Don’t know if it works or not. As always, I welcome your comments.
Be sure to read the other prompts at PT, see the comments here to find the folks who posted something on their blog this week. Perhaps it has something to do with change, perhaps not. But you will find some intriguing poetry. There's something for everyone.




10 Comments:
I love this - the images of the sifting light and the clanging door, the way the language sounds, and contrast between the two people. A poem to read several times.
What I loved about this poem was its familiarity- and just how on the mark it is for so many of us. "Grappling" with change is the perfect word for what we do when faced with change...
Yup, perfect...
Nice poem, cascading images.
Thanks for the hope for my country, Lesotho. We hit the polls on 17 February. Cheers.
.......deb,
Thanks for coming over for tea and comments.
I used the word crow as a noun. I won't say I was thinking: "some research points to crows' ability to thrive in our human-enclaves as being due to their love of novelty. Makes them more curious and open to learning and adapting."
But I'm glad you shared it. If you don't mind I'll use it if further explanation is needed.
For this use, I wanted a bird to symbolize change...ie; migration but it needed to rhyme with go. Even though "crows" don't migrate, I took some poetic license. ;-)
I think your piece goes right to the heart of resistance to change: "Hope or habit
reaches for heels, clawing."
We crave the security of sameness, and as you say, we, at the same time seek out novelty.
rel
I'm with rel - that line and its perfect alliteration really hit me. I also love the last stanza - it's such a twist, but sticks nicely in my brain.
"Choices slip, resettle.
A creed carried over
crevasses. Hope or habit
reaches for heels, clawing."
Very interesting thought. Very unusual. This is what stays in my mind.
gautami
Transposition.
Beautiful.
It's so wonderful to visit all the sites participating in PT and get a glimpse into the human soul!
Thanks everyone for visiting and leaving word.
CGP: Glad you like the two people--I had nearly made it an "I" poem but thought the mix might suit duality better.
Regina: Thanks! Grapple is a favorite word of mine :-) Seems I am there a lot of the time!
Rethabile: Thanks, as always, for your kind words. And I will look for news of Lesotho next week. Thank you for expanding my world.
rel: And many thanks for responding to my questions about your poem. I appreciate the dialog. You and twilight's thoughts about that one particular line helps me to see what chords might ring true.
twilight: Glad you mention the last line. It is out of place, and I thought about changing it many times, but I couldn't get rid of it.
gautami: Thanks for letting me know what struck you and for stopping by,
Beth:
Thanks for reading and commenting-so glad you are enjoying PT.
I love the language in here! I got so caught up in your word choices, turns of phrase, and images that I neglected to read for meaning. I'm going back now to read it again. Really great!
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